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Old 04-26-2003, 10:08 PM
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If you can't stand Pok?mon, don't read it.

I hand-drew the characters and BG's seperately, then scanned them into photoshop and colored.

What you think?

(I'm looking for feedback on the artwork more than critique of the storyline... lol)

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Old 04-26-2003, 10:18 PM
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should pika-chump have a green nose lol, erm its a good start. Id maybe variate it a bit more as at current your characters movements / expressions are a bit wooden, but the colouring is aceptable etc lol
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Old 04-27-2003, 01:27 AM
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Lol, ya, I haven't finished coloring all the expressions. Mebbe my next one'll be better. Actually, I don't have the "surprised-but-not-scared" expression drawn.. I need to make that

Thanx for the feedback.
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ermm... you want my opinion, it sucked!
no offence, but you did ask for the opinion
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Old 04-27-2003, 11:58 AM
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The eyes look weird to me, but nice.
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Lol

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Old 04-27-2003, 03:06 PM
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Lol

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Glad you like it! Here's the second one, with more expression and background
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Old 04-27-2003, 03:13 PM
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LMAO!

That second frame is good

*waves back at pikker*

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Old 04-27-2003, 03:32 PM
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*Pikker waves back @ u*
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Lol...Any more?

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