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Need painfully honest critique
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My first impression is good n professional. Nice logo. Not sure if its really applicable to Kentucky, but nice anyway.
The skin looks good to me. CMS: There is a big white square where google maps is supposed to be (in the Kentucky region article). Something is not working there. I use FF8. EDIT: it loads after quite a long time. You might want to check that page out with firebug. I dont like how the mp3 widget looks. Not sure if its meant to look Grey. When i click a song, I am taken to another site. No song. The clock looks very nice, but whats the use? Latest videos would look much better if the width would be wider. Now it looks cramped. Forum: Accuweather loads slow. Why no who's online? Way too many forums to start off with. The problem with this is that if people start looking at your forums and many have no activity, then they are gone. You would do better with fewer forums, and expanding later. It may be me, but I dislike the forum icon. (unless the particular image is part of Kentucky imagery) |
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Clock & Calculator?..
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When designing a layout, ask yourself "what widgets can I take out?" instead of "what widgets could I possibly add?". The clock widget is absolutely not needed. Less is more.
Also there's a bit of a CMS separator issue. Overall looks good though. |
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Max Taxable |
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Here's the first thing you should look at and improve:
http://www.webpagetest.org/result/11...ZQB/1/details/ This is terrible load time, and you also have a 404 not found error for one of your xml files: Code:
Request 80: URL: http://www.livinginkentucky.com/forums/events.xml Host: www.livinginkentucky.com IP: 69.89.31.61 Location: Provo, UT* Error/Status Code: 404 Start Offset: 6.916 s Time to First Byte: 301 ms Content Download: 36 ms Bytes In (downloaded): 2.8 KB Bytes Out (uploaded): 0.5 KB |
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I'd get rid of the clock widget and the mp3 widget (it's a mess to look at). When I first go to your site, you should wow me with something that is on your site that makes me want to be there. The first few widgets are useless and even take me to other sites. That's not what you want. The welcome message is nice, but pretty long. It might be better as an article - the first one they see and then all the content would move up instead of us having to scroll down to see anything.
Forums look nice. Why do I want to countdown to July 4th though? I mean, is it something super duper exciting in Kentucky (as compared to elsewhere)? Listen to what Lazorbeam said: Quote:
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- The logo... looks like you used a free font to generate it? Open it up in GIMP or some type of editor, now carefully cut out some of the skinny graffiti text from around the same letters... for example all the I's and N's you can see it prominently and only need it once per letter or remove all of it and only leave one little part to make it seem as if the painter "signed" the wall etc.
- Did anyone else mention that you should probably remove the clock and some of the widgets as they seem overbearing? - Figure out something and post a blog or disable it because there's nothing there currently, even if it's a Blog on why you feel the grass is greener in Kentucky just do something . I see a issue w/ my style in regards to the forum descriptions so check for a update in the next release and I will try to remember to PM you the fix as well , also I did receive your PM about a critique of the site I've just been extremely busy as of late both work-wise and Christmas-everything wise so forgive me for not replying until now . |
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Thanks soooo much y'all. I made note of all of your suggestions/comments and am currently in the process (after I finish typing this) of acting upon your input. The only thing I read here that really bothers me is that I have so many "116 requests". I'm kind of lost on how to correct that?
Again' Thanks for your time and very helpful critiques. |
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I totally understand not answering a pm. This is a very busy time of year for folks that have a job/life. I'm a home bound disabled veteran but I do remember what it used to be like Thanks for the critique, I'm pretty sure my site is headed in the right direction now. |
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