My Comic Strip

[gengar003]

If you can't stand Pok?mon, don't read it.

I hand-drew the characters and BG's seperately, then scanned them into photoshop and colored.

What you think?

(I'm looking for feedback on the artwork more than critique of the storyline... lol)

Current Strips:

1st Strip (https://vborg.vbsupport.ru/attachment.php?s=&postid=387664)
2nd Strip (https://vborg.vbsupport.ru/attachment.php?s=&postid=387931)
3rd Strip (https://vborg.vbsupport.ru/attachment.php?s=&postid=388036)
4th Strip (https://vborg.vbsupport.ru/attachment.php?s=&postid=391575)

[colicab-d]

should pika-chump have a green nose lol, erm its a good start. Id maybe variate it a bit more as at current your characters movements / expressions are a bit wooden, but the colouring is aceptable etc lol

[gengar003]

Lol, ya, I haven't finished coloring all the expressions. Mebbe my next one'll be better. Actually, I don't have the "surprised-but-not-scared" expression drawn.. I need to make that

Thanx for the feedback.

[Marzas]

ermm... you want my opinion, it sucked!
no offence, but you did ask for the opinion

[Tony G]

The eyes look weird to me, but nice.

[Chris M]

Lol;)

More more!:p

Satan

[gengar003]

Today at 04:11 PM hellsatan said this in Post #6 (https://vborg.vbsupport.ru/showthread.php?postid=387906#post387906)
Lol;)

More more!:p

Satan



Glad you like it! Here's the second one, with more expression and background

[Chris M]

LMAO!

That second frame is good;)

*waves back at pikker*:p

Satan

[gengar003]

*Pikker waves back @ u* :)

[Chris M]

Lol...Any more?:D

Satan

[NanoEntity]

hehe its pika CHU! :)

[gengar003]

This's my last one for today... #3!

Here it is:

[Chris M]

:eek:

Whats that creeping up?!!!!

Satan

[gengar003]

... Barney. No, it's someting else, you'll have to wait and see, lol. ;)

[assassingod]

They were....different:confused:

[Chris M]

Barney?

*loads shotgun:D*

Satan

[gengar003]

You don't get to see non-barney here, but you do get the fourth strip:

[GaleForce]

Its a good start, but I would have done it a bit differently.

From my experience reading webcomics, they usually start and then end with a joke or something, but still connect to one another. The reason I say that is because Strip 2 is just a connection strip, it didn't have much of a meaning except to connect 1 and 3. You could have added a fourth frame and had the camp ending up to be a hole or something, I don't know :p, but I think each strip should be a story in itself that has its own conclusion.

[gengar003]

Hm... I'll try to do that, but they are more of a story than a Joke. You're totally right about #2, and I'll try to have either somethin funny OR suspenseful at the end of each strip ;)