Throwing my site to the wolves

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Originally Posted by 1quick1

Yea I agree some red in there would break up the monotany. Problem is I pretty much such at design work.

I feel ya on that,

Some marketing/advertising tips, Add more information to your welcome message, Don't make it such one big long run on sentance that, just never, ends with a bunch, of comas, everywhere, i bet you didnt, like reading, this, and its just, like that welcome, message,.

I made someone this quick template the other day that asked, I'll share it with you as well

?All Hail The Mighty {Guest/Visitor/Some Other Catchy name} (make this h1 or h2)
Welcome to {insert name} where we offer {insert product/service}. Our service provides you with {some fancy details, list your 3 best} all for {price}. To enjoy our wonderful service, {registration/sign up instructions} is all you have to do! Doing so will entitle you to enjoy the most wonderful of features such as {different then the first 3 you listed/minor features/hosting plan details/whatever}

* {Something Cool Here}
* {Something Funny Here}
* {Nude Hillary Clinton Pics!}
* {Previous Example was probably bad}
* {Don?t use it!}

We look forward to having you join our great family of {Guilds/Webmasters/Whatever You?ve Got} today!?

Just replace what is in the {} with your information, It'll be a 89% improvement