It's a great start but it needs some fine-tuning.
- I'm not sure what pack o' poppies is about? poppy seeds?
- The logo is of poor quality. Remove the white space; change the font; is that a flower?
- Remove the large WELCOME MAT. It's not necessary. You are taking up valuable space ... if you remove it your visitors wouldn't have to scroll (vertically) so much to get to the content.
- the colors ... well ... not a great combination; if choosen correctly you can set a mood - what mood do you want to set? It could be inviting; it could repel; it could anger; it could be calming; it could be exciting; etc, etc
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