My only comment at this point is that I hesitate to do business with a businessperson with unprofessional grammar in the sales copy.
For example:
Quote:
vBCore is in the process of designing about 3 new styles that will be for sell.
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Little things like that can do a freelancer in. You'll need to really proofread your stuff or have one of your mods or admins help you if writing isn't your strength.