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Old 09-04-2009, 01:15 PM
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Poor selection of text and background colors. There is not enough contrast and make the site difficult to read. Black background and blue text does not work. Unless there is a high contrast between the two colors.

The header image is too big - 123.13 KB (126080 bytes). The entire homepage should not be larger then 100kb, and just the header image is that much. Convert that jng to jpeg and reduce the resolution a little bit. Maybe even reduce the height. The header image does not need to be any larger then about 20 - 30kb

The meta description is too long and needs to be reworked.

Quote:
<meta name="description" content="Gamingitis is where people who are addicted to gaming come not to find a cure, but to feed into their addiction by reading and writing reviews for other gamers to find their next fix." />
Your first targeted keyword "gaming" is the 9th word, it needs to be more like one of the first 3 words.

The description is full of trash words as well - "is, who, are, to, not, to, find, a, into, their" - all of those words need to be removed. Targeted keywords only and as few trash words as possible.
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