Feedback on my logo please?

[bashy]

Hi peeps

I have created a new logo with 1 of the many proggies out there and i would like to know your thoughts on this?

i.e. whats your thoughts on the colours, use of graphics and the logo as a whole...

Please note that this is my 1st try and i was trying to keep my original "Bashys Place" (google colours) involved as well as this was my 1st logo and prob know by it now!!

[Princeton]

please upload your logo :D

[Shazz]

The most obvious thing to miss :rolleyes:
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[bashy]

I really dont know what ya talking about :p

[Shelley_c]

I would give the text a cleaner crispier look. The slogan especially looks a little blurry but that could be the setting of the drop shadow you have implemented behind it.

Looks prity good for a first try but I would fix the text has it looks a little blurry. ;)

[Princeton]

- need more contrast
- remove/modify the shadow on text (makes it hard to read)

[bashy]

Thanks peeps...I did think it was a little blurry but your opions have made my mind up lol....

I will re-evaluate the slogan text/style...

Thanks again for your thoughts

[bashy]

Ok, i have had another go....
Must admit, it looks better actually on site lol

Your thoughts please?

[peterska2]

I very much prefer that one to the first one. Even as a thumbnail, it's a lot clearer.

[Princeton]

you still need to provide more contrast ... the buttons on your site provide more contrast than your logo

logo is too BIG ... there's no reason why you couldn't make it smaller

[amnesia623]

I usually design logos in grayscale first, then add color. That's just me though.

[Shazz]

I usually design logos in grayscale first, then add color. That's just me though.



The logo is very basic..
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[amnesia623]

I usually design logos in grayscale first, then add color. That's just me though.

Sorry - guess I should've explained that I sometimes design in grayscale so I can layout my dominant elements.
IMHO logos should state your business name and 1 element that compliments your business branding. Too much can get confusing.

If it were me... I would use the character and put the words bashy's place under his arm. I think the character is more identifiable with your font and colors. I would also remove the elements around that so they don't wash out the lettering. If you don't want to remove the other images I would then look into either a fatter font or putting a light glow arounf the letters.

That's just my opinion

Now that I look at it more, you could put bashy in between bashy's and place but above 'the place to be'

hope this helps or maybe sparks another idea